This Is How I Plot

(Blog title is stuck in my head, being chanted to the tune of "This Is Why I'm Hot." Someone please kill the earworm!)

Yesterday, I mentioned on Twitter that my white board was covered in sticky notes, and several people asked me to either post pictures or explain how I used the board and stickies. Last year, I did a post covering this topic, so if you'd like to read that original post, click here. Or, you can scroll down and I'll explain it again in this post, referencing the novel I'm now outlining.

I have about a zillion things due in the next three months. A short story. A novella. The fifth Soul Screamers novel (IF I DIE). And the synopsis for the first book in my new adult series. (Before people start asking--again--no, I can't talk about the new series in detail yet. Not until I have permission from my editor. All I can say now is that it's paranormal (of course) and that it's currently scheduled for fall of 2011, though that could change.) And this synopsis is the most pressing of my deadlines. It's due...oh...now. Yesterday. Pronto.

But here's the thing about first books in a series: they're hard. Not that any book is really ever easy to write, but it's always harder for me with the first book in the series, because you're starting everything from scratch. The world is new, and I don't really know it. The characters are new, and I don't really know them. The conflicts are new, and I don't really know them either. Which means that at the beginning of the process (which is where I am now), I'm flying blind.

Yesterday, after weeks of brainstorming on a couple of basic ideas, world building concepts, and vague character sketches, I sat down and actually plotted the novel. This is very hard work. It requires copious amounts of caffeine and Zen-like concentration.

[Craft word, as defined by Rachel: plotting - coming up with and organizing the actual events of the novel, including the main story line, the romance arc, and the relevant bits of the series arc. This is where I do the point-by-point, linear outline. By the end, I know all the major events and motivations which will propel the story.]

What I had when I started actually plotting:
  • A list of characters and their relationships
  • A list of important world-building facts--the rules of the world
  • A big, blank white board
  • Sticky notes, in three different colors, one for each plot thread
  • A fine point black pen
  • Notes, taken on my laptop, my iPad, and jotted on actual paper from my white board, before I erased it.
  • Coffee. Never underestimate the power of caffeine. Seriously.

[Disclaimer: The following is how Rachel plots a book. This method usually works for her, but that is no guarantee that it will work for anyone else. Nor is this post a criticism or condemnation of anyone else's plotting method.]

Step one: Assign colors to your plot threads. For this book, the green notes are the main plot thread, the pink ones are the romance plot thread (I know, it's cliche, but it's easy to remember) and yellow is the series arc. I actually am not fond of the color yellow, but that's all I had left. ;-)

Step two: write down every single event/transition/turning point you've thought of so far, each on a separate sticky note, doing your best to assign them to the proper color. (You can always re write them on a different color later, if it turns out you got that part wrong.) I always begin this part certain that I only know a few things about the book. The plot must be introduced. The characters must be introduced. Girl must meet boy, or girl #2, or whatever (or be reintroduced to boy, or girl #2, or whatever), even if your novel isn't actually a romance. If it has a romance thread, at some point, the romantic leads must meet.

But as usual, on ce I started jotting down all my ideas, I realized I knew a lot more than I thought I did. Some of it is backstory, which must be carefully spread out and sprinkled in small doses, only where and when it's necessary. Even more were events crucial to the central mystery, which must have been bouncing around in the back of my mind, even though I hadn't consciously agonized over them.

Regardless, by the time I'd written down everything I could think of, there were more than fifty sticky notes on my board.

(Content has been blurred to protect the innocent--which probably wasn't necessary, considering how sloppy my handwriting is.)

Step 3: Clean it up. Go through the notes and make sure that everything concerning the romance is on a pink note (or whatever color you've chosen). This is not a perfect science. Some things would fit on multiple colors, so just go with what you feel. Or your first instinct. Or whatever.

Step 4: Insert logic here. Start with the logical beginning and begin putting the notes in the order that makes most sense. This is the part where you love me for making you use notes, instead of just writing it all down on your white board. Like this, you can rearrange things until you like the story they're starting to show, without having to constantly erase and rewrite things.

At this stage, I sometimes have to trash and rewrite/rephrase some notes, to make everything fits. The notes to the side in the above picture are those that didn't make it into the plot.

Step 5: Fill in the blanks with more sticky notes. Sometimes these blanks are transitions. Sometimes they're plot elements I didn't even know I was missing until I saw gaps in my plot (literal gaping holes in my string of stickies). Sometimes the blanks are more back story elements that provide motivation or complicate relationships. And sometimes... (This part's awesome!) they're snippets of true inspiration--a Eureka! moment--formed when bits of the story fit together in ways I didn't anticipate.

Note: it's okay to leave a few gaps, or stickies that read something like, "the heroine saves the day through an amazing feat of bravery and invention, and the world falls to her feet to celebrate her." Because some details just won't come until you're actually writing the book. And I think that's a good thing. It keeps the author/book relationship alive. Preserves the chemistry, if that makes any sense.

Step 6: Write it all down. Open up a word document and begin writing down what happens in the book, going from one sticky note to the next. This is the skeletal beginnings of your synopsis. Once you flesh it out, layering in any motivation or character development you may have missed, you'll have a completely outlined novel, just waiting to be written.

This last step is what I'm working on today. The book is completely outlined, the characters, motivations, and conflicts are in place. Now I just have to write it all down and make it pretty.

Wish me luck!

15 comments:

wishing you luck and its great to see how authors plot books too. Its a great insight with color coding.

 

I think one day I'd like to try something like this. It seems flexible without being too rigid and that's how I prefer to outline when I actually do it.

Thanks for sharing! It's a very great method. :) Good luck writing!

 

This is such an easy (looking, not executing, I know that much) way to keep organized. Thanks for showing us how the pros do it :)

Good luck and can't wait to read what you have coming up next!

-Lisa B.

 

"♫ This is how I Plot ♫ "
Now that song is stuck in my head...
:)

 

I love when you give examples of plotting stories. I learn something new each time.

Thanks,
Oldteacher

 

Wow. That is quite the method. Sounds a bit more effective than how I wrote my first book in a series. I did more of a: get idea in dream but it's for second book or third. Decide to write the characters meeting as first book during a nanowrimo. Fail at nanowrimo. Take 2 years to write 23k. Work on plot and change POV in rewrite in hope of having a long enough book.

Yeah. Your method might be a little better. lol

Good luck with the new series and your many current deadlines.

 

This is a very important lesson. In high school & college for that matter, I remember all my professors saying your outline is due by whenever. As a music major, I always thought this outline, first draft stuff was such a waste of time, and who in the world would ever use this stuff again! I'd write my paper, then go back and write an outline, just so I didn't lose that grade. It is amazing to see just why they TRIED so hard to teach these lessons. As an adult (who knows what I would have thought back then) I think this is a wonderful way to explain why this lesson is important. My lesson for the day! Thank you Rachel!

 

That's tremendous! I read all the time and never thought at all about the plotting....just imagined authors at a laptop spacing out into the imaginary world and writing it! That could be why I'm not a writer...hhmmm. Thanks Rachel.

 

o.o thats really simular to how i plot- and...it kind of makes me feel like i'm plotting some coruption on peoples minds....lol

 

Good luck!!!

I'm soooo excited to see that you're starting a new series! I seriously can't wait to see what it is. I was having some major scare moments with the impending end to the Shifter series. I know you still have the Soul Screamers series but I just love your adult books more. ;)

Hugs!

 

There's a lock button on the right side of the iPad that, when you slide it, stays on the direction you have it when you lock it.
Anyways, I had the weirdest dream about Soul Screamers, and I just thought I'd tell you!

Okay, so I had a dream that I had just gotten MSTSteal. I was so excited too, so I started reading it, and I read the first couple of pages and it was a couple of weeks after MSTK left off, and Kaylee was being nice to Nash, giving the illusion that they kind of made up and were going out again.
And I was upset, because I wanted her to end up with Tod, but I thought it was still possible so I went to read the last two pages (A very bad habit I have) and it was Nash and Kaylee saying "We finally made it to Pluto" and they were describing the planet Pluto that they were apparently on!

It was very weird, but I just wanted to tell it to you. I have no clue why Pluto was in the dream. :)

 

Thank you for sharing this! I've been wondering ever since you Tweeted awhile back about using the wrong marker on your board. That inspired me to get my own plotting board (so much easier than the way I had been doing it). And now the stickies, I have to say I love this idea. Easy to move/redo/trash. Thanks for sharing the way you work.

 

GOOD LUCK!!!!!

i dont know what it's about but guessing how great your other series are... I CANT WAIT!!!

 

You know whats funny? I plot very VERY simillar to this and I have for years. The difference is, I use a half white board and half tack board. And I use different shapes and diffent colors on the tack board and on the white board I write the characters and how every one is intertwined. I use a sort of a bubble chart for that LOL